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Wednesday, April 6, 2011

18. New Concept video but its too long

Worked late into the night... 1:30am to be exact, to finish up this video slideshow to pitch my business concept in a different manner than the cartoon. Well, maybe because I was tired and working at a more slower mood set... I'm looking at it today with fresh eyes and realizing it is too SLOW and too long. Going to have to do a better job at just getting to the point. 
What is the Customer pain point... BAM 
What is the value proposition... BAM 
How am  I going to accomplish this and time frames... BAM  
And why is your team the kickass team to do it. BAM 

But shit... I'm learning a lot from all these mistakes.

I need to send out this email blast to friends and family to get votes on MassChallenge so it will have to wait. I also only have till the 11th to finish my application for MassChallenge so this is going on the back burner.

But if you have 5 minutes to burn. Here you go:






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